Saturday, December 09, 2006

A Lucky Hitchhiking

Carlo seemed puzzled.
He went home thinking about her, she was really strange and the unknown situation suited him one more time.
He had a wife, and she was waiting him to dinner. On that night, all changed, the dinner was quite good. They were enjoying it and suddenly the communication between them was happening. Their marriage was dead for a long time ago and they knew it. He put the blame on her because she was unblessed. She couldn’t give birth.
Fortunately, on that evening, they found love and a new and perfect resolution to fight for their marriage.
They agreed on everything. His wife, Andrea, prepared a nice and warm meal to give to the girl.
They were happy.
Carlo drove all night and Andrea helped him by enquiring people on the streets. They were looking for her in the old part of the girl’s town. That town seemed to them very scary to a little girl. They felt as they had a mystery to solve.
They were after her like a dog chases his bone.
It would be helpful if they were given some information about this unhappy girl. But no-one seemed to know the girl. She was unnoticed in that town. How sad could it be? They started all over again. They couldn’t stop. And they did not stop.
For a few days they were obsessed with her.
Lucky the girl was fine; she was living in a hidden space, right behind that dark and strange doorway. When they approached her she was ashamed to be seen in that dirty place.
They talked to her in order to become familiar. They all had a nice conversation and they gave her that special meal; they shared it and everything turned out to be quite nice; different from what had been expected.
A few days later, she was known as Antonela Florenze, she became a member of the family Florenze. They had adopted her and she was happier than ever.
The jacket was her protection from the cold nights and her luck to a brand new life with love.



Filipa Pedro

3 Comments:

At 7:25 PM, Blogger Psithurism said...

What a beautiful ending. Who would have thought that the mysterious hitchhiker would become Carlo´s daughter and would solve all the problems between him and his wife. I really enjoyed it. **

 
At 11:38 PM, Blogger Filipa Pedro said...

lOl I've always liked to read stories with a happy ending and so I did one that I thought must people wouldn't think of. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
At 7:52 PM, Blogger thewildstyle (por Filipa Correia e Catarina Dias) said...

I enjoyed it too! what an unexpected story. your imagination really fited well in this story.

 

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