Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Version 2

A few days later, Carlo went back to find her at that same place. He asked an old lady on the street if she knew a blond hair and large green eyes’ girl and she answered that she lived in number 5, Indian Plaza so he drove there. He rang the bell but nobody answered. He tried again until he heard a voice of a girl telling him to wait just a second. She opened the door and Carlo stopped and looked at her beauty. In that moment, he understood that he was in love. He truly loved a girl he barely knew. She told him to come in so he did. They talked for hours and she told him what he had guessed in first place, she had had a row with her boyfriend (now ex-boyfriend) and he had left her there, freezing in the middle of the night. She started to cry but Carlo hold her in his arms and, just like that, they kissed. Carlo said everything he felt for her. She told him as well and they promised they would stay together as long as they liked each other, so they did.

Filipa Correia

2 Comments:

At 8:37 PM, Blogger Filipa Pedro said...

Pipa, that's what i'm talking about...love stories to fill our hearts with hope and joy.
i liked =) i felt happy for them lol when we think we're without hope and everything is wrong and against us...we find happiness in the arms of a wonderful person. oh, what a dream =P but, everyone wants that. lol
Filipa Pedro

 
At 6:57 PM, Blogger Psithurism said...

It´s a love story, unfortunately the kind that rarely happen nowadays. No one believes in eternal love anymore. But how everyone would love if love could be everlasting, so many problems would be solved and so many quarrels would be avoided. Great version

 

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